Making A Plan

If you’ve been hanging around in writing circles for any amount of time, you have probably heard about one of the most fundamental decisions you will ever make as a writer. And that is- whether to outline.

You probably think I’m joking, and I am. According to most writers, this isn’t so much a decision as a personality type. Some people- ‘pantsers’ or, more poetically, ‘discovery writers’- come up with an idea, sit down with their pen or laptop, and the story comes out fully formed. No planning, no making story maps in the shower with your children’s bathtub crayons, and then your terrible poetry is just up there forever, because that stuff does not wash off as easily as advertised….

Ahem. This is not for those people.

And let me clarify by saying that unless you’ve already managed to write a novel that way once already, I do not suggest trying to write your first novel that way. Society has this expectation that creative people are spontaneous and mystical, and our work just comes to us like visions from the gods.

I’m not discounting story ideas that arise from dreams or that one time you breathed in too much Sharpie fumes, but to have a successful story, you have to have structure. Unless you have a lot of practice and an intuitive understanding of narrative structure, you need an outline, or your story will fall flat.

Or more likely, it will never be finished. If you’re the kind of person who comes up with a killer hook and and amazing ending but then can never get past chapter one, an outline is just the thing you need.

I’m saying this from experience. I hate plans. I have been accused of having a ‘chaos aura.’ But I never write without an outline anymore because as soon as I started using one, I went from having never completed a narrative in my life to writing a 50,000 word romance in six weeks.

Building a Narrative for Fun and Profit

So what do I mean by narrative structure? You know every story has a beginning, middle, and an end. You probably learned in school that stories build to a climax before concluding. That’s all really basic stuff.

The purpose of structure is managing reader emotions as well as conforming to their expectations. In every genre, there are conventions about how the story goes that need to be followed if you’re going to reach the right audience. For example, a mystery begins with a crime, a romance ends with a happy ending, a fantasy has magic etc. There’s nothing wrong with experimentation, but if you aren’t an experienced writer, I’d suggest you stick to more tried and true methods.

For fantasy, and most other types of popular fiction, you’ll want to use some variety of three-act structure, based at least partly on the Hero’s Journey as written by Joseph Campbell. If you want a deep dive into the subject, you can read his book, The Hero With a Thousand Faces, but you can find quick explanations of the fundamentals all over the web.

What I plan on doing is taking you through my preferred outline, one step at a time. I’ve been using it for five years, and I have no idea where I found it, but it begins with…

Stage 1: The Setup

This is where you show the protagonist living their normal life. And I don’t mean that it’s time for an info dump about the world and the plot. Don’t show your protagonist in front of a mirror describing their appearance. What readers want is a sense of the protagonist’s life, their personality and relationships. Look at any popular or famous fantasy story and you’ll see what I mean.

Start with Lord of the Rings, which is about as basic fantasy as it gets, even if it is on the dry and wordy side. We begin at Bilbo and Frodo’s birthday party. There we meet our protagonist and his friends, including the mysterious Gandalf, and we get an idea of the way they interact. We learn about hobbit culture and get a glimpse of the troubles in the wider world, even if they don’t affect the characters yet. And it doesn’t feel like exposition.

Let’s look at something more modern like The Lightning Thief by Rick Riordan. It starts with our protagonist, Percy Jackson, on a school field trip. We hear about his troubles with school, meet his best friend, Grover, and his favorite teacher, and we see him deal with a bully.

In both cases, we get a sense that the protagonist has problems for which an immediate solution doesn’t present itself. Frodo loves the Shire but feels restless and unfulfilled. Percy just wants to have a school year where he doesn’t get expelled, despite the fact that everything he does seems to go wrong. This dissonance between their wishes and their reality will lead us naturally into the next step.

Turning Point 1: Opportunity

This outline is based around the concept of turning points, which is an important event in the story where the circumstances drastically change. Often, this includes a shift in the protagonist’s goals.

The first turning point is what is often referred to as the ‘Call to Action’. Something happens that gives the protagonist a chance to step out of their normal life and have an adventure. In classical stories, the hero often refuses at first. In Lord of the Rings, Frodo tries to put away the One Ring, to give it to Gandalf, to do anything but take the enormous responsibility laid before him.

Refusing the Call is an optional step. The most important thing is giving your protagonist an opportunity to make a change in their life. Frodo takes possession of the One Ring, intending to bring it to Rivendell. Percy Jackson has a bit more complicated of a set-up, involving a math teacher turning into a Fury and trying to kill him, but when Grover reveals himself to be a satyr tasked with protecting him, Percy is the one who has to make the decision to believe him and flee to Camp Half-Blood.

It’s at this point where we should get a sense of how the protagonist’s goals may be changing. Previously, they may have wanted nothing more than to survive, or have a peaceful life, but now they have a mission.

Example Outline

So, how do you turn this structure into an outline? Let’s look at an old story of mine, Blood Price.

To start off with, I wanted a coming of age story set in a magical world. I decided to focus on a young member of the fae who has been raised to hate mortals, but an accident in the human world shakes up her worldview. I start with Stage 1.

Stage One: The Setup: Branwyn t’Ysbryd awaits the start of the Wild Hunt with her twin sister, Blodwyn. It is the first time they’ve been allowed to participate, though their father Ciardha, is the Huntmaster of the u’Dziki. They enter the portal to the mortal world.

We learn about the protagonist, her world and relationships. She’s eager to please her father, yet also aware that this is somewhat futile. Then comes the first turning point.

Turning Point One: Opportunity: Branwyn’s horse Arianmwyg spooks and leaps a fence, throwing Branwyn and injuring her leg. She manages to hide in a barn and falls into a fitful sleep. The next day, the human farmers care for her and set her leg. She’s surprised because she’s only heard horrible things about humans.

The next night, her sister comes to rescue her. It turns out Ciardha had forbidden anyone to go after Branwyn. They teleport back to their mother Anand, who announces that she is done with Ciardha for good.

In this case, the turning point is a two stage operation. Branwyn learns her enemies aren’t as fearsome as she imagined and that her father is more callous than she expected. Everything she knows is changing.

In Stage 2, the protagonist will get a taste of a new reality and will have to decide how to act on their shifting goals. But that’s a whole other blog post.

Until then, happy writing – Kit

The Beginning

Let’s get one thing clear right now, shall we? There is no Idea Dump, no Story Central, no Island of the Buried Bestsellers; good story ideas seem to come quite literally from nowhere, sailing at you right out of the empty sky: two previously unrelated ideas come together and make something new under the sun. Your job isn’t to find these ideas but to recognize them when they show up.

Stephen King- On Writing

In the beginning, there was a piece of blank paper.

Possibly an unused journal, an empty screen, or a smoothed out napkin. But the start of every story, the heart of it, is an idea.

It has been said that ideas are cheap. Everyone has ideas after all; even children make up stories. For all we know, your dog is constructing a narrative that makes them into the hero of your household, bravely defending your house from the mailman.

The thing is, you can make any idea into a story. Jim Butcher, famous as the author of the Dresden Files, was once presented with a challenge. Write a novel with the worst idea ever, proposed by the challenger as ‘Pokémon crossed with the lost Roman legion.’ The resulting series, Codex Alera, eventually spanned six novels and was well-received by critics and readers.

So you can find ideas anywhere. Some of my favorite ways are: imagining different endings or circumstances for my favorite stories, using a random idea generator like BrainStormer, or finding a weird historical event and putting in a different time or world.

The real trick is developing that idea into a story. One that you’re going to want to write.

Writing Your Passion

The common wisdom is “write what you know”. There’s some truth in that. There’s no better way to make a story feel real than to put in details from your actual life. Which is why most of Stephen King’s protagonists are alcoholic writers and a lot of mine are broke college students. Our experience makes the writing easier and more authentic.

But when you read a book that really blows you away, that you read over and over again, it’s not going to be because of the little details. A story can only make you feel things if it comes from a place of real emotion. So once you have your idea, wherever it comes from, (Little Red Riding Hood in space, anyone?), you’re going to do a little brainstorming.

Think of the things that move you. That make you cry, or laugh. Something you’re afraid of. Something that pisses you off. Write them down next to your idea.

Me, I’m a sucker for forbidden romance. And right now, lying politicians and unfair economic systems are really making me angry, for some reason, so I’m going to write those down. The deaths of innocent children are a pretty instant tearjerker for me, so maybe I’ll write that down too.

To add a note here, there is something to be said for going into places that make you uncomfortable. But, especially if this is pretty early in your writing journey, don’t risk your mental health for the sake of a good story.

Anyway, so now I’ve got something like “Little Red Riding Hood in space: a forbidden romance pitting the fate of innocent children against crooked politicians and a cruel and greedy society.” Sounds kinda cool. I’m almost excited to write this, despite the pile of other projects on my figurative desk, and that’s the idea. Not only does writing what you care about bring more emotion to your work, but it can serve as a potent motivator.

Bringing the Tension

You may have heard before that conflict is important to a good story. I didn’t really understand this at first. I’m not a very confrontational person, and even now, I have a hard time writing realistic disagreements between my characters.

But that’s not necessarily the kind of conflict a story needs. It would actually be difficult to base a whole novel on a personal argument, though I’m sure that’s been done. The real conflict is between the protagonist(s)’ goal and various obstacles that prevent them from achieving it. These could be another character, they could be physical, they could even be moral.

Let’s examine possible conflicts with Little Red Rocket Hood. She’s obviously on a journey, delivering something to a loved one. Maybe she’s delivering medicine to a sick younger sibling, or she’s going to trade something of value to get something she needs.

The first obstacle is going to be physical, the distance she has to travel and all that entails, the dangers of the dark void of space.

The second obstacle is another character: The Big Bad Wolf. Maybe he’s a space pirate, trying to steal her goods. Maybe he needs her spaceship for his own reasons. Either way, he’s out to get her, and she’s got to get away. But if we bring in that forbidden romance angle… maybe she doesn’t entirely want to get away. Now she has a secondary goal in direct conflict with the first, and we haven’t even brought up the antagonist yet.

The more conflict there is, the higher the stakes, the more your readers will be glued to your story, eager to find out how the hero gets out of their newest predicament. But you can’t just toss all this conflict at them at once.

Narratives have a structure, and planning yours out before you start drafting is going to make your job a lot easier. But that’s for a different post. Happy writing – Kit.

Characters You Hate to Love

I am currently taking a writing class entitled, “Characters,” by Gotham Writers. Their classes are expensive so I have high hopes for this class. Anyway, one of our assignments is to write about a character that draws us in whether or not we like them.

I spend a considerable amount of time reading. Those of you who have read previous blog posts already know that I prefer reading self-published fiction for many different reasons. However, it is rare that I have read an unforgettable character from a self-published author. Why is that? I don’t know, but exploring this assignment has given me a little insight into myself. I have a very dark side. As a writer, I am inclined to embrace this, but as a mother, I am uncomfortable with it.

In the last year I have read three novels that had protagonists that should have been repulsive and dislikable, however, not only did I find myself liking the serial murderers in these books, I also hoped that they would evade capture for their crimes. The characters and books I am referring to are: The unnamed character in Normal by Graeme Cameron, Joe Goldberg in You by Caroline Kepnes, and Dexter in the Dexter series by Jeff Lindsay. All three of the main characters in these books were serial killers. I should be repulsed by these men as human beings. I was not then, nor am I now. I liked them.

I suppose there are numerous theories and psychobabble why such a phenomenon happens. By phenomenon, I am specifically referring to how a law-abiding and caring citizen such as myself who is repulsed and shocked by violent, true-life crime, can find empathy and root for fictional bad guys like Joe Goldberg and Dexter Morgan. I believe it is a side effect of truly remarkable writing.

I do not think I am deranged or abnormal in any way. Rather I think the writer has found “the power of the pen” and has the enviable talent of creating unique characters that bridges the gap between reading and in-person interactions (or tv viewing as is this case). In other words, I felt these characters’ charisma by reading about them. Even though I could not see them, I still felt the allure of their personalities.

When I watched You, the movie, I saw Joe’s charisma. The same goes for Dexter Morgan. I also felt these two characters’ charisma when I read the books. (I watched the movies and then read the books. I know… it should have been the other way around). However, in the case of the book, Normal, there was no TV show but I still felt this character’s undeniable charisma. Where does such good writing come from? I don’t know, but I want it.

Homemade Book Covers

As I browse Amazon’s kindle store, my subconscious sifts through all of the unappealing book covers and stops only on those that present eye-catching covers. Why is that? Well, because readers really do judge a book by its cover, and I am no exception.

There are thousands of self-published books in any given genre. To stand out and attract readers, your book needs a cover that reflects the quality of its contents. Amateur book covers that scream, “self-published” are not a successful sales tactic.

Amazon doesn’t distinguish between traditional and self-published books when providing search results. An unprofessional book cover that is surrounded by books with eye-catching covers will not seduce many readers.

Unfortunately, too many independent authors ignore the importance of a professional book cover. This may be due to lack of funds or possibly a rush to publish. Either way, and regardless of the reason, homemade book covers can ruin sales and unduly influence potential readership.

The Back Cover and Why It’s So Important

So, You’ve Finally Finish Your Book. Now What?

Many self-published authors spend months writing, obsessing over, and finally completing their book only to overlook the importance of a professional and polished back cover.

As a voracious reader of self-published books, I spend several hours a week on Amazon scanning the back covers of newly released novels. If the back cover is poorly written or has grammar problems or misspelled words, I will mentally tick it off as “not worth my time” and move on to the next book in line.

The back cover is the first thing that most readers will see making it one of the best and cheapest advertisement tools that an author can have.

 So, what am I looking for when I read the back book cover?

First, and foremost, I am looking for something wonderful to read. I often read for three to four hours in one sitting, and I don’t want my precious reading time wasted.

Here is what I look for when I am choosing a book:

  1. The back cover should be about two to three paragraphs of the most engaging plot points. You have about 250 words to convince me to read your book so make every word count. Rambling for four or five paragraphs is not convincing. When I see a long and disjointed synopsis, I skip it and move to the next book choice.
  2. The synopsis must be free of misspelled words and grammar errors. This is very important. If you can’t write a few easy-to-understand paragraphs that are error free, there is no way I am going to waste my money and buy your book. Not only is your back cover a sales tool, it is also an example of your writing style and knowledge of good writing techniques.
  3. Sell the narrative arc without deceiving your reader. I will never read another book by an author who intentionally dupes me into buying a book with a misleading book synopsis.
  4. Don’t write a detailed author bio on the back book cover. Focus on the plot not the author, I don’t care about the author if the plot doesn’t interest me.